"Tax overhaul: Thai excise department plans restructuring to close loopholes"
which could be rewritten
"Tax overhaul: Thai excise department plans restructuring to squeeze more money out of the already suffering population."
Normally a professional would make their initialisms. truncated names, shortform words/descriptions made known early in the piece for later reference and clarification. Does this imply I am not dealing with professionals?
"Thailand is in fourth place. Chiang Mai, in the northern region, offers breathtaking scenery with many mountains and country roads for peaceful living" along with amazing pollution in the crop burning season.