A Poem For Nok, My Soul Mate

[sunshine13]

Nok

Like a cookie you are sweet

who would have thought that love

in all its infinite glory

was waiting for me inside pizza hut

your black skirt so sexy

yet you so innocent

and beautiful

me, i am 59 year young today

your birthday is in three days,

you are so wise for a 19 year old.

Love in the rarest of places -

they call it the land of smiles

but a smile is just a smile

and love is infinite

Nok, like a cookie so I will eat you up

two souls that are one

can you believe how special this is

i will love you forever and always

[cdnvic]

You really like that airline don't you?

[markr]

Nok

Like a cookie you are sweet

who would have thought that love

in all its infinite glory

was waiting for me inside pizza hut

your black skirt so sexy

yet you so innocent

and beautiful

me, i am 59 year young today

your birthday is in three days,

you are so wise for a 19 year old.

Love in the rarest of places -

they call it the land of smiles

but a smile is just a smile

and love is infinite

Nok, like a cookie so I will eat you up

two souls that are one

can you believe how special this is

i will love you forever and always

Oh dear sunshine13 what love you dote,

I cant believe that crap you wrote.

Off the internet i would have thought,

Please dont worry, you have been caught.

I wish you the best of luck,and all the happiness in the world,

you silly old schmuck

Mark

Edited April 16, 2007 by markr

[taxexile]

in bangkok there was a old geezer

who liked a plate of pizza

she served him a hawaian

and now hes a flyin

lets hope he dont have no seizure

[bkkmadness]

The Thailand effects reduces a 59 year old man to write a crap poem in tinglish.

Gotta love this country.

[sunshine13]

they look at us

with their hateful eyes

what shall we do?

but turn the other cheek

two young kids in love

lest us enjoy this bliss

[Maigo6]

they look at us

with their hateful eyes

what shall we do?

but turn the other cheek

two young kids in love

lest us enjoy this bliss

Sunshine, are you stoned ?

Edited April 16, 2007 by Maigo6

[WaiWai]

sunshine, you made me think of another great poet :

My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun

(Sonnet 130)

by William Shakespeare

My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;

Coral is far more red than her lips' red;

If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun;

If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.

I have seen roses damasked, red and white,

But no such roses see I in her cheeks;

And in some perfumes is there more delight

Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.

I love to hear her speak, yet well I know

That music hath a far more pleasing sound;

I grant I never saw a goddess go;

My mistress when she walks treads on the ground.

And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare

As any she belied with false compare.

[mrbojangles]

they look at us

with their hateful eyes

what shall we do?

but turn the other cheek

two young kids in love

lest us enjoy this bliss

Doesn't even rhyme

[sunshine13]

the other thai teenagers

look at you enviously

yet your chin doesnt rise

you remain modest

i try to give you money

but you refuse and

say true love has no price

i have a surprise for your

birthday in three days

here is a hint -

Splash!

((i am getting us a yearly pass to So-Soy-Am Water Park))

[markr]

the other thai teenagers

look at you enviously

yet your chin doesnt rise

you remain modest

i try to give you money

but you refuse and

say true love has no price

i have a surprise for your

birthday in three days

here is a hint -

Splash!

((i am getting us a yearly pass to So-Soy-Am Water Park))

Sunshine, it seems to me like you are hanging around with thai kids

This is worrying

[MTW]

I read on another topic posting that you were buying your g/f a yearly pass to a waterpark as a wedding gift.

I wonder what do you buy your grandchildren, wedding rings? Thailand should be called Land of Fantasy, not LOS.

[kayo]

Hey sunshine

What are you on mate?

Now, if only somebody could post some "posting guidelines" my day would be complete.

[markr]

Hey sunshine

What are you on mate?

Now, if only somebody could post some "posting guidelines" my day would be complete.

Good shout Kayo!

This is rule 5 of sunshines guidelines!

5. if you dont have something interesting or funny to say, dont bother posting because it clutters the board.

There must be drugs involved

Mark

Edited April 16, 2007 by markr

[enyaw]

the other thai teenagers

look at you enviously

yet your chin doesnt rise

you remain modest

i try to give you money

but you refuse and

say true love has no price

i have a surprise for your

birthday in three days

here is a hint -

Splash!

((i am getting us a yearly pass to So-Soy-Am Water Park))

Total waffle!

[sunshine13]

Nok

Your favorite band is Girly Berry

you love the b street boys too

how should i say "Mai Ru"?

But no need to say that

You know me so well, wearing your hat

Two love birds flying through the Sky

Lets never whisper "Bye Bye"

40 years I am your senior

Please dont change your calm demeanor

[donna]

what a 'lovely' poem, sunshine13.

will you be posting another one about the chick in the t-shirt shop who you want to 'set up as your mia noi'?

unbelieveable.

[El Taco Loco]

He will loose all lust for her once she picks her nose!

[onzestan]

You really like that airline don't you?

Love at first sight

Oh what a delight

At a quarter to nine

He stood there in line

To board her for his first flight

onzestan

[WaiWai]

I guess this thread will soon be closed, but I, for one, am enjoying the satire.

Not subtle, sunshine .... ahem ... you know your audience.

[Pattaya_Fox]

Well Sunshine I think that your Ode to Nok has been well viewed and it`s time to move on so this thread is now closed.