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PeaceBlondie

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  1. First thoughts are it is too 'one paced', I would mix it up a bit, put a few more angles in the sub-plot and introduce a few more characters.

    At the moment it is not too dissimilar to the usual saturday night in PatPong

    Thanks Mossfinn, for constructive critique.

    However, I've been to Patpong, where I saw no Mayas, hardly a Shan, no assassinations, no clay mountain trails, nobody in a tunic, no cardinal being smeared with fresh brains while 100 million viewers watch aghast; no aged queen.., "You're not a Patpong regular are you PaulMossfin? :)

    Single issue? Three countries, five cultures, a half dozen themes; saving a Karen girl from human traffickers; destroying a 1600-year heresy that blessed all warfare; etc. Maybe 90 named characters.

    Sorry I didn't mention that before. Again, thanks.

  2. If there are only two ring roads, there is no middle one.

    Most people that have visited or lived in Chiang Mai city for some time use reference to Inner, Middle, and Outer Ring roads, PeaceBlondie. If you don't believe it, just do an internet search for "Chiang Mai Inner Ring Road", another for "Chiang Mai Middle Ring Road", and another for "Chiang Mai Outer Ring Road". It may not be official naming (I doubt if any, including Bangkok, are officially named Ring Roads).

    MSPain

    I got here in 2003. Apparently you mean the (partial) ring road that goes from Canal Road, under Hang Dong Road, past Global House, etc. - perhaps highway 3029.

    This cite - "Middle Ring Road, Sarapee, Chiang Mai" sounds like Outer Ring Road, 121.

    This map illustrates it I think: http://www.pimuk.co.th/home.php?file=locat...amp;language=en

  3. In 2001, my Mayan friends had no cell phone, landline, electricity or plumbing. Maria's teenagers taught her that the earth revolves around the sun. Yet they invented corn and zero, and had great astronomers when our ancestors shivered in caves in Europe.

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