Can Anybody Help Me ?

[rcm]

Hi ,

Some close friends just made their small website about their lovely Resort . They asked me if i can check if the English Text used was correct ....my English isn't all that bad but i'd guess i would miss many points . Would be great if somebody who has English Mothertongue , excellent English or English teaching level could check this site. Not wanting to make some advertisement here so i will send the link of the Website as PM . Thank you in advance ,

rcm

Edited September 22, 2006 by rcm

[h90]

Hi ,

Some close friends just made their small website about their lovely Resort . They asked me if i can check if the English Text used was correct ....my English isn't all that bad but i'd guess i would miss many points . Would be great if somebody who has English Mothertongue , excellent English or English teaching level could check this site. Not wanting to make some advertisement here so i will send the link of the Website as PM . Thank you in advance ,

rcm

I can not as my mothertongue is German, but I think you should offer something in exchange for the work. I would say a weekend in the resort for free would be a good offer as it basically does not cost you anything as long as you are not fully booked and it looks a lot nicer than working for free.....

(if it is near a good diving place I check you the german part )

[phibunmike]

Hi ,

Some close friends just made their small website about their lovely Resort . They asked me if i can check if the English Text used was correct ....my English isn't all that bad but i'd guess i would miss many points . Would be great if somebody who has English Mothertongue , excellent English or English teaching level could check this site. Not wanting to make some advertisement here so i will send the link of the Website as PM . Thank you in advance ,

rcm

Send me the url, I will have a look if it is not too long...

[phibunmike]

Well, it is nicely written and the standard of English is much higher than many posts we see here

The writer is clearly fluent in English, but perhaps is of German origin ? I only say that because of the choice of capitalisation; although sometimes use of capitals on certain nouns can be a deliberate writing style.

In the following, read ":=" as "can/should be changed to"

On the main page:

Forests := Forest's

Ideal Spot := ideal spot

Guest Rooms := guest rooms

undisturbed Time := undisturbed time

Aircondition := Airconditioning

and most of it := and most of all

On page catalog_1:

up to 2 person := up to 2 persons (a curious part of English where persons is used instead of people)

... these are very minor things, I don't need to look at more, the standard is very high

Looks like a nice place !

[phibunmike]

A Wedding in this tranquil surroundings are surely a highlight.

:=

A wedding in these tranquil surroundings would surely be a highlight.

Edited September 22, 2006 by phibunmike

[rcm]

Well, it is nicely written and the standard of English is much higher than many posts we see here

The writer is clearly fluent in English, but perhaps is of German origin ? I only say that because of the choice of capitalisation; although sometimes use of capitals on certain nouns can be a deliberate writing style.

In the following, read ":=" as "can/should be changed to"

On the main page:

Forests := Forest's

Ideal Spot := ideal spot

Guest Rooms := guest rooms

undisturbed Time := undisturbed time

Aircondition := Airconditioning

and most of it := and most of all

On page catalog_1:

up to 2 person := up to 2 persons (a curious part of English where persons is used instead of people)

... these are very minor things, I don't need to look at more, the standard is very high

Looks like a nice place !

Thanks a lot....yes,there was some German Speaker messing in that Text too ...

[kayo]

RCm, can you send me the link?