It wasn’t luck, it would have been insatiable greed that drove him to his own death.
Probably dwelled all day every day on his lost wealth, cars and all other material things he no longer has. (had)
I don't know about easily entertained, but I admire the gift of the prose, something I don't possess.
But what makes a story juvenile? To me it portrayed an account of how things can often go strangely wrong in Thailand when you least expect it.
Anyway, what kind of story or writing do you find entertaining? And what are you really expecting to see when you come to this part of the forum? A bunch of old men moaning about their drinking problem or Thai partner woes? Or maybe a story about how the food they ordered in a restaurant wasn't cooked well enough? Is that what you find entertaining?
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