merry christmas all

 

desperatly need help re-writing relationship letter any kind sole willing to help me?

 

 

thanx

What's the letter for and what sort of relationship, you really need to give us a clue?

OP is most likely talking about a letter to help Thai Girlfriend get a visa to his/her home country, a letter that shows a relationship with the person providing the invitation and funding the trip ???

2 hours ago, Peterw42 said:

OP is most likely talking about a letter to help Thai Girlfriend get a visa to his/her home country, a letter that shows a relationship with the person providing the invitation and funding the trip ???

correct ☺️

Yes, but we still need more information.

Is your girlfriend planning to go to the UK for a long or short trip, what is your relationship and for how long, what's the purpose of the proposed trip and how long, are you financing the trip or just offering accomodation, what are her ties to her home country, have you evidence of you relationship.
She needs to satisfy the decision maker that her proposed trip is genuine, affordable and that it's probable that she will return home at the conclusion of her holiday. 

The previous poster has made an educated guess, you have provided very little information.

If this is all the Op can contribute when requesting assistance I suspect he's going to be facing a rather extreme struggle.

 

I also wonder why some would be prepared to assist when the request for assistance is so outlandishly thin on information rendering any potential assistance impossible. 

its for a visitor visa to the uk for my girlfriend who im sponsoring

 

my relationship letter is too brief and badly written to be honest and just wanted someone wiser and more experienced than me to cast their eyes over it and make it better 

 

For a visa, there is no such thing as a relationship letter. They don't really care about the state of her relationship; they want to be satisfied that she will have sufficient funds to support her while in the UK, and she must show reason why she would want to return to Thailand (property, job etc.)

If you are providing the funds by sponsoring her, then a sponsor letter would be appropriate; explaining the funds that will be used to support her and providing evidence of those funds.