I think that there are many good photo opportunities in the above scene. You chose to try and get them all in the frame at once which makes the image look cluttered. An interesting image nonetheless.

Welcome to the forum btw

The idea's nice- maybe if you played around with curves, lightness and perspectives it might be better

just my 2 cents worth

this image is a mess, there is no subject and no idea expressed. Delete it. Its not a good idea to keep bad images around as you do not want to have them as a reference for further pics.

If you only keep the good ones, your next photo will be better

its ok if you have 1 shot that is good in 50 you are doing very well indeed