Yeah, my eyes just got wider as I read ... conquer European skies, graced, European escapade, whisk passengers, the banner of TH(really?)954 ...
It's hard to sift out the actual flight details which are the real point of the post.
It should be short, pithy and crisp, with perhaps 2 classy metaphors/adjectives for color. People want the info not literary pretensions.
As I read I was feeling sorry for those who have to churn out such verbal blancmange just to pay the rent.