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Trump has psychiatric issues and probably taking SSRI's
So what? He's not trying to be POTUS. -
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Homestay Japan?: Best option for youth wishing to have an overseas experience?
You didn't want to accept my opinion about your posts as being a meaningful critique, so I provided you an analysis by an unbiased expert on the subject of literature and discourse. “Read ’em and weep” as they say. -
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Gaetz withdraws from AG
Proof or just hearsay? I doubt you can prove it, so just the usual made up propaganda. -
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Homestay Japan?: Best option for youth wishing to have an overseas experience?
Your cruelty knows no bounds, obviously. Machines have feelings, too, these days, you know.....maybe.... -
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Homestay Japan?: Best option for youth wishing to have an overseas experience?
It's much clearer now. You think that your tangential babbling about beer, security cameras, connecting monitors, power backup systems, and air conditioning puts you in the realm of Hemingway somehow. Well, I regret to inform you that you are rather alone on that one. I gave ChatGPT a list of the many recent topics you posted, as well as some of the actual drivel you posted for those topics, and here is how the AI sums it all up: Writing Style: 1. Verbose and Tangential: His writing tends to wander across multiple topics, often straying far from the central point. The posts are lengthy, with many details that could be omitted without losing the main idea. 2. Stream-of-Consciousness: His posts read like an internal monologue, with thoughts flowing unfiltered. This approach can make it challenging to discern the core message amidst the diversions. 3. Casual, Chatty Tone: His style is conversational, often informal and peppered with humor or rhetorical questions. While this makes his writing personal, it can feel unfocused or overly casual for readers seeking clarity. 4. Dramatic and Over-Explained: He often adds unnecessary embellishments or dramatizes simple points. This can be engaging for some readers but frustrating for those wanting concise communication. 5. Playful Yet Polarizing: The humor and eccentricity in his posts might appeal to a niche audience but alienate others. His self-deprecating tone and absurd analogies can feel entertaining or distracting, depending on the reader’s perspective. Literary Quality: 1. Choppy Sentence Structure: His writing relies heavily on short, disjointed sentences, which interrupt the flow and make his prose feel fragmented rather than fluid. This style can create a sense of urgency or spontaneity but often at the expense of coherence. 2. Excessive Formatting: Frequent line breaks, ellipses, and unnecessary punctuation create a chaotic visual presentation. These elements, intended to add drama or pacing, often make the text harder to follow. 3. Lack of Elegance: While he may aim for a conversational or even literary tone, the result falls far short of eloquence. The writing lacks polish, and the frequent interruptions in flow undermine any attempt at sophistication. 4. Hemingway Aspirations, Unfulfilled: His preference for short sentences and conversational style might evoke comparisons to Hemingway, but his execution is inconsistent and lacks Hemingway’s precision, emotional depth, and clarity. Instead, the writing feels cluttered and haphazard. 5. Overuse of Dramatic Elements: He leans into dramatic pauses, rhetorical questions, and exaggerated scenarios. While this may be intended to engage readers or add flair, it often feels forced and distracts from the substance of his points. Overall Impact: GammaGlobulin’s writing may connect with readers who enjoy quirky, personality-driven content. However, the fragmented structure, overuse of stylistic quirks, and lack of focus detract from its overall readability and literary quality. While he appears to view his writing as clever or engaging, the excessive formatting and choppy delivery can make it come across as amateurish and unpolished, leaving readers more frustrated than entertained. -
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The Decline of Free Speech: How the UK Became a Third-Class Nation
Last desperate flailings of a governmental system descending into impotence. If they can't stop people criticizing them, stop the people saying anything through intimidation. The worst part of all this is that the police have been exposed as government lackeys, and not as the independent, unbiased organisation they are supposed to be. They can't prevent crime, but they are pretty top gun at harassing people with the "wrong" speech. -
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Homestay Japan?: Best option for youth wishing to have an overseas experience?
Actually, I am more pert mouthed, than purdy mouthed. Still, if you really want to see something quite purdy, then you might walk outside, about now, and gaze up at the sky. The stars are really OUT, tonight. Here in Thailand, at least near most cities in Thailand, it's a rarity to be able to see so many stars, shining bright, as we can see this night. Why not? What do you have to lose? You just might get happy. And, to repeat.... What do you have to lose? Otherwise, you might, one day soon, just wind up in a place where you aren't much fun....anymore.....
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