3sky Posted July 9, 2008 Share Posted July 9, 2008 Gave my son a bookSix months, smart and full of spit. Don't eat it, read it. my daughter does exaclty the same! just so real. great one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aries27 Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 (edited) Wonders of wonders! This thread still alive..how so? And slow moving too! Edited July 16, 2008 by aries27 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pumpuiman Posted October 15, 2008 Author Share Posted October 15, 2008 (edited) His shirt is yellow His old friend is wearing red Pawns for billionaires Edited October 15, 2008 by pumpuiman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
junki3korean Posted October 16, 2008 Share Posted October 16, 2008 i am confused haiku.....thaiku what do i do?? does this pass?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adjan jb Posted October 16, 2008 Share Posted October 16, 2008 Black and grey city In a desert of green fields, No direction home Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pumpuiman Posted October 24, 2008 Author Share Posted October 24, 2008 i am confusedhaiku.....thaiku what do i do?? does this pass?? the beat of your prose sadly does not fit the mold a rebel rhythm (Haiku should be....3 lines of 5,7 then 5 syllables. Keep em' comin ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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