Please Evaluate My Photo

[Pepper9187]

Kind of agree with other people on that one, i'm not a portrait / body shot person more a landscape but :

 

1) Backround color + model top green, not for me

2) Somes lights / shadows and contrasts issues (Don't know the lense you used, but at 1.8 it could be just too soft and not rendering enough contrast / sharpness).

3) Green ground background needs to be "tighten"

4) No need to shoot at F1.8 if you don't intend to have any bokeh or voluntary "softness".

 

Don't take the comments personally OP, you asked advises, it's what it is.