These photos were taken using my cybershot camera, unfortunately not many setting to play experiment with. These two used different EV settings, the rest is auto

totster

Both of the images work as far as framing, composition and exposure are concerned (level the horizon though), but they need a boat or the like on the water to eliminate the empty space. Had there been such a vessel (especially crossing the light rays) I think you would see a very appealing and powerful image.

Both good though as they stand.